The shower turned out the way I wanted it too. The spot I used was perfect for size and lighting. It was dark, just like the ones in the girls bathroom. The critique went all right. Some people rather had seen it where I put my thoughts all over the walls to get the full effect, which I guess is a good idea. As John would say, "this can be take one step further." If I were to come back to this in the future, I would definitely look into covering the walls with the thougths. But I purposely didn't do that in this piece because i wanted my thoughts only on the things i touch or spend time on, such as the majority of my thoughts were on the shampoo, conditioner, and soap bottles because I spend a decent amount of time washing my hair, conditioning, and so on. I was also very happy with the sound effects of the shower playing in the back ground. Thank God for Garage Band. I only wish that I could have found a voice recorder for cheap so the sound would continuosly play throughout the day, but they are all just too expensive.
Well, one thing I learned for sure in this class is that nothing is ever finished. There is always more you can do, things to add. You don't really realize it until you have someone looking at it from an outside perspective to give you ideas or ways they would have liked to see it presented. Once I master being able to look at it as an outsider myself, I feel that I will be able to produce mor completed work.




